tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post3432848389846451668..comments2023-03-29T12:23:07.533-07:00Comments on I caught this morning's morning minion...: Haiku...of sorts..~im just only me~http://www.blogger.com/profile/17468965486093974442noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-34919618385090810562008-05-14T19:38:00.000-07:002008-05-14T19:38:00.000-07:00ok im gonna change "Oh laughing city!" to "oh! lau...ok im gonna change "Oh laughing city!" to "oh! laughing city:" like Robert Hass' description of "oh!"... you would have had to have been there though...ermm... ill see if i can find his explanation somewhere... or remember it exactly... lol~im just only me~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17468965486093974442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-59456911742030377872008-05-05T08:53:00.000-07:002008-05-05T08:53:00.000-07:00wow i cannot spell apparently... *too* metaphorica...wow i cannot spell apparently... *too* metaphorical...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-65742480702709175482008-05-04T12:08:00.000-07:002008-05-04T12:08:00.000-07:00I wish I can write haiku that's objective-- mine i...I wish I can write haiku that's objective-- mine is quite sentimental...<BR/><BR/>I really love pixie dust ~.~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-41446152325973511542008-05-01T14:44:00.000-07:002008-05-01T14:44:00.000-07:00i originally had "Oh! Laughing city," ...im think...i originally had "Oh! Laughing city," ...im thinking maybe "our"... i dont like my though..... hmmm~im just only me~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17468965486093974442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-12129087439088773512008-05-01T13:55:00.000-07:002008-05-01T13:55:00.000-07:00what about saying "my" instead of oh?what about saying "my" instead of oh?don't be emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12610909211896466990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-40868435219657166012008-05-01T13:33:00.000-07:002008-05-01T13:33:00.000-07:00first try at a haiku ... i went to metaphorical i ...first try at a haiku ... i went to metaphorical i think... have to work on that one... the form is there however lol... i think hehe~im just only me~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17468965486093974442noreply@blogger.com