tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post5705550486631587547..comments2023-03-29T12:23:07.533-07:00Comments on I caught this morning's morning minion...: "Here's to the fear of being trapped..."~im just only me~http://www.blogger.com/profile/17468965486093974442noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-78148391566607815502008-06-24T11:09:00.001-07:002008-06-24T11:09:00.001-07:00You know me, cass; minimalist sometimes....PS huje...You know me, cass; minimalist sometimes....<BR/>PS hujen!!!don't be emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12610909211896466990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-2400619304158084042008-06-24T11:09:00.000-07:002008-06-24T11:09:00.000-07:00heck, why not? :)I need some comments from you!!!!...heck, why not? :)<BR/>I need some comments from you!!!!don't be emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12610909211896466990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-3568360617031221272008-06-13T14:56:00.000-07:002008-06-13T14:56:00.000-07:00p.s. i know i alresdy told you i like it... and i...p.s. i know i alresdy told you i like it... and i especially love the quote at the end... just thought i would put it in writing is all.Daynahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15114642460015742134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-85827793758182722322008-06-13T14:54:00.000-07:002008-06-13T14:54:00.000-07:00Don't take out gushing... true, it doesn't really...Don't take out gushing... true, it doesn't really need it, but <I>seriously</I> kate, not liking it is not a good enough reason, lol...Daynahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15114642460015742134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-55415320029832505032008-06-12T18:41:00.000-07:002008-06-12T18:41:00.000-07:00If I amy-- at first I didn't likd the way that "so...If I amy-- at first I didn't likd the way that "so bright that I could die...this hardened heart" seemed to flow too quickly, but then I suppose truth does work that fast in it's brightness.. but with those last words "hardened heart" there came a quick halt which seemed to emphasize the hardened heart. <BR/>As for the "gushing"...when I read it moderately slow and with an emphasis on every word in that line, it does seem to fit. <BR/>Dunno, tha's what a non-poet thinks of what they've read. Probably not worth much at all. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-38324124259095081412008-06-03T11:09:00.000-07:002008-06-03T11:09:00.000-07:00i just don't like that word, and it somehow makes ...i just don't like that word, and it somehow makes the line less believable, overdone or something. the other words are enough. it doesn't really fit. my opinion only of course.don't be emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12610909211896466990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-34731377819581221132008-05-30T21:30:00.000-07:002008-05-30T21:30:00.000-07:00why take out gushing?... p.s. yaruq!!why take out gushing?... <BR/>p.s. yaruq!!~im just only me~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17468965486093974442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-29438115123727314962008-05-30T14:50:00.000-07:002008-05-30T14:50:00.000-07:00...direct quote... i know, annoying isnt it lol, b......direct quote... i know, annoying isnt it lol, but also i think its like that for emphasis, doesnt have quite the same meaning when grammatically proper... thanks... i dont like "trenchant" -- well its growing on me -- but i just could not think of any other word. I wanted one that means "with all the perfect and ultimate realness of C.S. Lewis' heaven and Plato's forms..."...riiiight lol, i think "pierce" and "transfix" helped me out though... so yeah :)~im just only me~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17468965486093974442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512387192495993400.post-16729035394967633412008-05-30T13:44:00.000-07:002008-05-30T13:44:00.000-07:00Love it. Take "gushing" out, don't need it. and sp...Love it. Take "gushing" out, don't need it. and split infinitive in the last line, unless it's a direct quote.don't be emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12610909211896466990noreply@blogger.com