Friday, March 14, 2008

"The Road to Awe"

Burst bubbles
Broaden horizons
Hurting horrendously
But bringing
Brazen Life;
Liberating like
Swelling symphonies
Tearing to
Terrible bits
But Ah! Building
Such sweet
Sounds that
The thousand
Parts pound
Parched Souls
With water
Wrought from
Flaming Fountains
Sparkling Springs
Shining dark --
Dreams,
Crying, copper
Coated, for
Fortune, Friend,
Love, Life,
Light, Magic,
Magnificent
Meaning.

11 comments:

don't be emily said...

Too many capitals. The effect wears itself out.

~im just only me~ said...

ok, i wondered if it would be lol...

~im just only me~ said...

"...They planted a seed over his grave. The seed became a tree. Moses said his father became a part of that tree. He grew into the wood, into the bloom. And when a sparrow ate the tree's fruit, his father flew with the birds. He said... death was his father's road to awe. That's what he called it. The road to awe..."
and
"The Road to Awe" -Clint Mansell

~im just only me~ said...

better?

Mother of Perseus said...

Holy Alliteration Batman
But I love alliteration with a passion.

don't be emily said...

somewhat.
my poor short attention span gets a bit lost in the short lines, too many sounds. is that the point?

~im just only me~ said...

kind of... its like all those things together make a whole but they seem and have to be separate...like you can have a fountain without the breakup of the stream, or rainbows without water drops...dreams without all the little things that dont make sense... kind of like the heart how all the cells beat separately, but put together they give life... something like that... lol if that means anything at all lol

~im just only me~ said...

oops... *cant* have a fountain...

Anonymous said...

Hah!... if ever there was an Irish in you it sure did come out with gusto on this one...


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don't be emily said...

damn. blast you irish. so utterly unpredictable. hate your talent. even if what you wrote was utter trash, you can defend it with enough blarney to convince everyone it's great. ;)

~im just only me~ said...

;)