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Here’s a hymn to welcome in the day
Heralding a summer’s early sway
And all the bulbs all coming in
To begin
The thrushes bleating battle with the wrens
Disrupts my reverie again
Pegging clothing on the line
Training jasmine how to vine
Up the arbor to your door
And more
You’re standing on the landing with the war
You shouldered all the night before
And once upon it
The yellow bonnets
Garland all the lawn
And you were waking
And day was breaking
A panoply of song
And summer comes to Springville Hill
A barony of ivy in the trees
Expanding out its empire by degrees
And all the branches burst to bloom
In the boom
Heaven sent this cardinal maroon
To decorate our living room
And years from now when this old light
Isn’t ambling anymore
Will I bring myself to write
“I give my best to Springville Hill”
8 comments:
I love it. Unfortunately, that means your poem is now cursed throughout eternity....
hey, at least it will last that long... Gotta take what i can :P Thanks :)
@Cass: rofl.
I too love it; and yes... too bad.
This three liner... does it have a name/style type? or is it just free verse?
prehary... lol!
chemical romance. i think your life is undeniably if unwittingly ruled by chemistry and chemists.
"...From the ashes of destruction , grow the roses, grow the roses, grow the roses of success!!!!!" lol we need to watch that again...
p.o.s.h....posh
and upon looking at this a second time, i think to myself... hmmm, anna nalick, very nice...
inespir
lol thanks, no special form, just random :) Kate, I dont know if I should be pleased or not about that lol :)
I read this again today, and two things:
1)how true, and how beautiful
2) I was singing "grow the rose, grow the rose, grow the ros-ES!" in the shop yesterday, to the amusment of all.
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